It’s time for Friday Fictioneers. Thank you to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting and to Roger Bultot for this week’s photo prompt.
Friday Fictioneers is a weekly writing group, challenged to write a 100-word story with a beginning, middle, and end. Everyone is welcome to give it a try.
My 100-word story follows.
Passing the Torch
Miranda stared at Scarlett starring at herself half-dressed in the mirror. A lacy bra hugged her delicate curves and her lashes fluttered amid a patchwork of highlights and shadows.
It was yesterday all over again. Miranda choked on the musty dust of backstage and held her breath.
“Oh,” said Scarlett. “Your last performance. But you don’t look ready.”
“It’s just a cameo.” She placed a pair of dangling, diamond earrings in her palm. “These are sitting in for my last performance instead. Wear these tonight. For me.”
“Such an honor.” Scarlett’s hands shook as she put them on.
“Keep them.”
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It comes to us all in the end… Nicely observed tale on the prompt.
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That’s true, Iain. It sure seems that way. Life goes on. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
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Sad. I love the way the earrings are used. Well told.
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Thanks, Laurie. Glad you liked it.
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Well done. I don’t spend nearly as much time reading your work as I should.
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Thank you, Mark. Aw, that’s sweet of you to say. Well, you know where to find me!
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Very sensitive, well written piece. I enjoyed this
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Thanks so much, Michael. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Oh the earrings works so well… There is a sadness, but maybe also hope in the passing of a torch.
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Thanks, Bjorn. The earrings just came into my mind. Glad it works. I think of this as hopeful. What can you do? You can’t hold the torch forever now, can you?
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I think it might torch you if you do.
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Exactly!
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This is so touching Amy. The earrings were a lovely touch.
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Thanks, Louise. I just saw shimmering earrings with this prompt
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I guess it’s time for Scarlett to take over. Quite sad – the end of an era.
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I guess the has come for a new star to take center stage. Happy time for Scarlett but a letting go for Miranda. Thanks, Ali.
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Very touching. It’s bitter sweet to pass the torch to the next generation whether you are an actress or a surgeon 😷. But we know when our performance has come to an end.
Tracey
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Thanks, Tracey. Yeah, that’s the way I think of it, bitter sweet. I imagine that happens in any profession as with surgeons like you mentioned. And even Willy Wonka! Hopefully, it’s a continuation of passion and more good things to come.
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works very well, correct words and beautiful and touching!!
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Thanks so much, Mihran. You make me smile.
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Sad enough. I want to keep the torch here with me! Nobody’s taking it!
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I know what you mean, Perry. But you gotta give it up someday. Otherwise, you could get torched! That wouldn’t end well.
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Dear Amy,
I really like where the prompt took you. As others have said the earrings are a nice touch. Much said in your well layered story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle. I’m glad you like my direction. I felt good about this story. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Brilliant take.
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Thank you!
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Wonderful take on the prompt, Amy. The earrings are a great touch xxx
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Thanks so much, Dianne. So good to see you. xoxo
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Beautiful thoughts. I hope when my time comes I can pass the torch so graciously.
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Thanks, Life Lessons. I’m with you. Me too!
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I love this – there’s a real story in these 100 words!
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Wow, thanks so much. I’m glad you enjoyed it, Barbara.
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A lovely, bittersweet take on the prompt. Very well done.
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You captured SO much here, Amy. I really admire your ability to do that! The emotion and backstory and choices like the earrings gave this so much depth. It was really a pleasure to read. xo
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I’m so glad it was a pleasurable experience, Kelly. 🙂 You always make me smile. Thanks for continuing to read my stories and for all your support. I appreciate it so much. xo
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Always my pleasure. Your stories make me smile as well! xo
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Thanks so much, Anne. So glad you enjoyed it.
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Being a theater person myself… dress rehearsal tomorrow night for the 9.. count them NINE performances this week of The Odyssey (children’s version) *sigh* … this piece really resonated with me. Well done! Loved it Amy! 🙂
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Wow, Courtney! Nine performances in a week. That’s very busy!! How exciting for you. I know we talked about dance once. How cool that you’re performing in a theater production of The Odyssey. I can’t say I ever did that one! Break a leg!! Thanks.
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Yep… it is for kiddos. They are bringing them in from area elementary schools and we have 2 performances each day in the morning and then one night performance Friday for parents, teachers, friends..etc. I will be glad when this week is over! There is another drama after this one but I am not in it… thank goodness! Rehearsals begin next Monday! I will be helping in the box office the nights of the performances but I don’t have to worry about that until November! 😉
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I know how that goes. You love it, but it’s also very exhausting and you have to do that other thing called life. I hope all your performances go well. Hang in there! I’m everything will be wonderful.
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I agree with what Bjorn said. Well done, Amy
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Thank you, Alicia. Glad you liked it.
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LOVE. Also, your blog looks so pretty! Haven’t been here in a while. Love the changes. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Beth. Yeah, I think I just chose a weird theme. 🙂 Glad you like it.
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A lovely way of passing the torch. Ha! I just noticed that is the name of your story.
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Haha. Why yes, Dawn. I just call it like I see it! Thanks.
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So much said in the spaces between. I liked this a lot.
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Thanks so much, Ellen. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Amy I am pleased to greet you here. Come join me sometime for a read and a smile.😇
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Of course, I’ll do that. I like reading and smiling. Thank you.
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One way or another this happens to most of us, but here it happens with kindness, gratitude, maybe even love, and a lot of understanding. Wonderful story.
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Oh, thanks Gah. Love your thoughts. I’m thrilled those emotions came across for you.
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It’s always bittersweet moving on and leaving someone to take your place. We all would do well to handle it with the grace that Miranda did. Hopefully, Scarlet will do the same some day.
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What a nice thought, Michelle. We might as well go with grace since we can’t stop it. Thanks for your thoughtful comments.
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How sad for Miranda, but she’s taking it like a true lady. Good use of the earrings, Amy. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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It is a little sad, Suzanne, but I’d like to think she’s taking it in stride. I’m glad you liked the earrings. 🙂
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Very nice, Amy. You capture emotions well with this one.
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Thank you, Audra. Glad that came across.
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I wish I could have a torch, but I’m told I can’t even be trusted with a Bic lighter.
Well written piece, Amy.
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